¿Hablas español?

[hellziggy]

Hey intarwebs? Wanna check my homework for me?

La tarea escrita: Write a paragraph of 6-8 complete sentences in Spanish. You should:
introduce yourself (i.e. say how you are called); state where you’re from;
say where you go to school (and please do not translate names, such as
Minneapolis Community and Technical College); indicate what classes
you are taking and on what days *and* at what times you are taking
them; state where you work or that you do not work.

This is what I have:

Me llamo Sharon Snyder. Soy de los Estados Unidos, de Minnesota. Estudio diseño gráfico a Minneapolis Community and Technical College. Yo tomo dos clases... diseño Web HTML y español. Tomo diseño Web HTML los lunes a las cinco y media de la tarde. Tomo español los martes y jueves a la una y media de la tarde. Yo trabajo a West Photo.

If you know Spanish and see any glaring mistakes, feel free to point them out to me! :)

Gracias!

Comments

[lexiphanic.livejournal.com]

Not sure if you need an article (i.e. "el") in front of "espanol" (and maybe "deseno") or not. Sorry, can't be bothered to find the tilde characters, but you know what I mean. That would change your sentences to "Tomo el deseno Web..." and "Tomo el espanol...." Spanish uses articles a lot more than English, but it's not totally consistent.

[hellziggy.livejournal.com]

According to the examples in the book i don't need an article.
I don't blame you on the figuring out the characters thing. ¡I just change my keyboard to español when I'm doing my homework! The ñ key is the ; when I've got it changed.
¡Gracias!